In the animal wisdom of the archaic I stake my claim
in a time before claims, before stakes
in the oneiric, the telluric, the cthonic
My lizard mind jumps ahead, in mineral rhythm
In a clearing I rest a bit, then resume my way
through the dense vegetation
I am actually starting to like this, I mean it would need work but I like the progression and I like the last line
ReplyDeleteI think think it should go on longer or maybe be part of something else.
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