tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post2632927073318134081..comments2024-03-10T23:01:51.493-05:00Comments on Stupid Motivational Tricks / Bemsha Swing: Signposting Without Signposting (2)Jonathanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-8982981477791645692011-02-11T15:49:31.251-06:002011-02-11T15:49:31.251-06:00Any time. Also, would an "of course," be...Any time. Also, would an "of course," between "as well" and "from Heidegger" be in its place? (It would establish a rapport between the writer and the implicitly knowledgeable reader. But perhaps that knowledge should not be implied?)Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858865501469168339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-41374849047936463732011-02-11T15:41:15.395-06:002011-02-11T15:41:15.395-06:00That would be an improvement, I think. Thanks.That would be an improvement, I think. Thanks.Jonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-46083762251538355832011-02-11T14:18:45.804-06:002011-02-11T14:18:45.804-06:00That first sentence strikes me as too long, too qu...That first sentence strikes me as too long, too qualified. Is there anything wrong with something like this:<br /><br />The “late modernism” that developed in Spanish poetry during the final decades of the twentieth century is not a mere revival of historical modernism. The work of José Ángel Valente, Antonio Gamoneda, and similar poets is in fact a highly selective revision of the cultural Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858865501469168339noreply@blogger.com