tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post349773846528342711..comments2024-03-10T23:01:51.493-05:00Comments on Stupid Motivational Tricks / Bemsha Swing: Ineffective (ii)Jonathanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-66420136454559435782011-02-23T21:41:12.680-06:002011-02-23T21:41:12.680-06:00While indeed terrible, I'm afraid it's rea...While indeed terrible, I'm afraid it's really no worse than the usual poetry blurb. Do you think the poet (name easy to discover by Googling any of the text you haven't masked) wrote it himself? Or was it his <a href="http://blueyellowdog.weebly.com/" rel="nofollow">publisher</a>?Vance Maverickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07477306994564623348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-46117727974130550082011-02-23T20:55:58.309-06:002011-02-23T20:55:58.309-06:00They are also very fun to write!They are also very fun to write!Jonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-16444677072288356072011-02-23T20:51:31.399-06:002011-02-23T20:51:31.399-06:00If this press release was written with the goal of...If this press release was written with the goal of promoting a book, I don't think it will achieve that goal. The piece is pompous and very difficult to understand. "The poet takes a scalpel to the body of his experiences" simply sounds horrible. <br /><br />I think posts such as this one are very important. There is a lot of grandiloquent, cliche-ridden, empty writing whose authorsClarissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11027134365260069910noreply@blogger.com