tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post3639407933938893514..comments2024-03-10T23:01:51.493-05:00Comments on Stupid Motivational Tricks / Bemsha Swing: FlatnessJonathanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1055932257464975902.post-8221914028632165342015-06-04T08:51:04.896-05:002015-06-04T08:51:04.896-05:00I did notice that flatness. What is missing is the...I did notice that flatness. What is missing is the sense of urgency, the "why" behind the information, or something to make it come alive. As a deliberate exercise in saying what you know in brief paragraphs, its works, but it lacks rhetorical justification, somehow. I think this post identifies the problem. Jonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09371893596402673898noreply@blogger.com