There's one Bousoño points out in Carnero and Gil de Biedma, maybe in Cerunda: the fourteen syllable line divided into 7 + 7, with one of the lines shortened to 6.
Now we have units of 5, 6, and 7.
"en aquellos momentos / de miedo y esperanzas"
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If we have a 11 syllable line that dives up into 5 and 6.
Then a seven syllable line.
The we have a nice asymmetrical pattern of 5, 6, 7. Góngora does this a lot:
"Desnudo el joven, cuanto ya el vestido
océano ha bebido..."