Here the lines seem enjambed, but are really not, because the line break acts as a punctuation.
"I dreamed you brought home a baby / Solid girl, could already walk / In blue corduroy overalls/ Nice and strange, baby to keep close / I hadn't thought of it before..."
So she only needs punctuation in the middle of the lines. There is some true enjambment later in the poem "door / of building."
The balance between continuity and the integrity of the line is ideal (for my ear).
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