I had written a story with some erotic twist with the title "The Q of the Queue." I was surprised to see it was ranked #1 on a particular website called *********, since I did not remember having uploaded it there. I was trying to read the comments on the story, but I couldn't find them.
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Off topic.
Book. "What this [phenomenon] allows is..."
What I would say. "This [phenomenon] allows..."
Amiright or does their wordiness carry a different meaning?
Right. It is more wordy and means the same thing. There is merely a shift of emphasis, like saying "what I'm going to do is..." vs. "I'm going to ..." The wordier wording gives more weight to what will follow.
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