Adding: seeing where something is missing, something needs to be expanded.
Subtracting: seeing where you've gone on too long on a topic, or expressed something in too many words.
Reorganizing: seeing where the parts are not in proper order.
Rewriting: seeing ideas that need to be better expressed. Clearing up confusion. Giving paragraphs a proper shape. Smoothing transitions.
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Very nice! (And the series of revisions of poems has been very cool to read.)
Thanks, Andrew!
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