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Wednesday, July 27, 2016

Correction of a Poem by Pacheco

"We are no longer everything / we fought against when we were young"*


*[the original poem says the opposite: we have become everything we fought against when we were young. I read it wrong by mistake and then was sorely disappointed that it said ya instead of ya no).

1 comment:

Leslie said...

Right ... disappointing ...